Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and town is more important than building houses.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals are of the opinion that building green landscapes in the urban areas are more important than fabrication of building. I personally agree with this statement and will explain my reasons in the following.
To begin with, certainly, planting trees in the cities decrease the air pollution. To explain this vividly, scientific evidence shows that a variety of plants specious can decline the poisonous metals on the atmosphere. In fact, they can make the air cleaner and healthier. Furthermore, designing green spaces upgrade mental health of citizens. In fact, some research shows that presenting in the parks and greenhouses can be effective in improving depression and anxiety.
Despite this, the growing number of populations in the towns ought not be ignored. As a matter of fact, a huge number of people would like to accommodate in the cities. Unfortunately, the accommodating of such population needs to provide an extensive ground in the cities. Therefore, the specialist must apply advanced and new approaches to make a balance between greenbelt and construction of houses.
To conclude, I personally agree with designing green spaces in the urban area because of the vital role of them in the people’s well- being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, in fact, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29292929293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97240994747 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8678743011 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169265425236 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524028153574 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541138365329 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958432832262 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463785800784 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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