Some people think rest and sleep are the best methods to relax while others think that it can be done by involving in some activities like sports. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion?
To get relaxed, is the core subject of indiviual’s life. it can be achieved either by any physical exercise or by laying down peacefully and take a proper nap. I shall explain my point of view while analyzing different sides of the argument to a greater extent.
to begin with, physical fitness and exercise is significant in one’s life. For relaxation standpoint, it is necessary to involve in these type of activities to rejuvenate oneself. sports, especially lowers the hyper-tension, obesity problems and relax one’s muscles and brain. For example, various substantially number of indiviuals, these days are doing myriad of workouts in gym to reduce constructively heavyness of their mind.
Nevertheless, sleep is also on the same footing to equip relaxation to human body. Not only, it is the stress buster, but also refreshes both the body and brain. but on the other hand, only to rely upon this is not the gateway for healthy and wise life. For instance, medical patient lying at hospital bed gets enough of sleep, eventhough his body is not relaxed. So, to this end, bodily efforts are much needed.
From the above evidences, it is ostensible that physical involvement and sports are essential for all round development. In short, it is plausible for human beings’ calmness and decompress.
In nutshell, it is counter productive for everyone to lead a happy and healthy life. The cog in the wheel is ‘relaxation’ which can only be gained with indulging in physical activity. healthy mind resides in healthy body.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in short, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18972332016 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11850443515 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628458498024 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7943597845 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2352941176 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102190729206 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302640448023 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293785913288 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539680717776 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129070862647 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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