Some people think that rest and sleep are the best methods to relax while others think that it can be done by involving in some activities like sports. Do you agree or disagree and give your view?
People have different views about relaxing. A certain group, think that sound sleep is one of the best approaches for calming while others believe that indulging into exercise is good for relaxation. I undoubtedly agree with the idea that dozing helps to relax.
There are several reasons that sleeping is helpful for calming. One reason is that in today’s fast-paced world we are very much tired and exhausted that we need enough sleep more than getting involved in activities like exercise because, while napping we are allowing our mind and body to get relaxed. For example, when we are working for more than 9 hours and inclusive of that we are travelling which leads to fatigue so, we cannot involve ourselves in sports rather, we need sleep as it affects both mental and physical health which is vital for our well-being.
Another reason is that there are some people who are strictly advised not to get involved into any kind of activities due to some health issues therefore, they should sleep for a sufficient amount of time because, it has a direct connection to our health. Recently, a survey was conducted which involved two groups of people, where one group was asked to sleep for at least 6-8 hours and the other was requested to sleep for less than 6 hours. The former group was very much attentive and was productive at work, because, the latter group was feeling lethargic and was facing some health problems like increase in blood pressure and it also leads to insomnia.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I believe that taking proper amount of sleep is helpful for soothing and relaxing our mind and body instead of physical training.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88811188811 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4470628881 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2212092814 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165451432212 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735764626469 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385099023742 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10417320376 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574171196576 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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