Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some school of thought believe that high school students should learn about foreign information as part of their courses while others think it is unnecessary and will lead to complete wastage of essential school time. Learning about foreign information can lead to cumbersomeness of course load but I however believe it is important as it helps broaden their knowledge.
On the one hand,high school students studying international news is important as it helps broaden their knowledge, keeping them abreast of happenings in the world from an early age. This increases their scope of learning new and different words daily and hence, it is very important. For example,a research was carried out recently in Lekki area of Nigeria, and it appeared that the students who were opportune to attend British high secondary school tend to intimidate those who did not as they appeared more intelligent and informed.
On the other hand,it is said that learning about international information can lead to wastage of school time as it can make course work at school cumbersome. This means an increase in work load for the students as well as posing stress on them especially when having to study for examination. I however believe that no knowledge acquired in school is a waste and studying foreign information is as important as learning school courses.
In conclusion, whilst it is believed that studying about foreign information at school is a worthless and unproductive as it increases school course load on student, i however think that it is very essential as it broadens their knowledge and keep them informed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15209125475 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84920041576 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490494296578 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0151924625 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.555555556 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1111111111 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265041154037 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122969265711 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717122987403 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177282754376 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159106364225 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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