Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged.
Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the contemporary world, raising children to become successful in the future is a topic of general. A school of thought holds that children should be nourished to be competitive. While there is no denying that there are compelling arguments for that idea, I personally lean towards the opinion which supports children should be taught to co-operate with others and will give my reasons below.
On the one hand, the fact that children are more competitive is beneficial to some extent. firstly, competitiveness helps children who are still at a young age to work harder. For example, a sense of competition will empower the motivation inside a student which may help him or her try to study more diligently in order to surpass somebody who is better than him or her. secondly, it will increase a higher chance of employability and have more chance of success. they will be more competitive with their rivals and more determined to achieve their goals.
On the other hand, I firmly support the idea that children should learn to collaborate with others. firstly, cooperation helps children to understand the true meaning of respect and belief, which helps them to cultivate skills that can be used in the future, especially in group projects. A man, for example, can't do a colossal amount of job himself but he has to share with others to complete his tasks. learning to cooperate, moreover, is a worthwhile skill that can help a person secure employment. secondly, it will help children to make more friends. With more relationships, you can easily ask for help when needed and it will lead to the road to success. In addition to that, it can help children learn the value of helping each other and become more useful.
In conclusion, although competition is good, I strongly believe that children with cooperation skills will become more respected and easier to be successful. Even though there are many hurdles in life, they can still combat any problems because they have their supporters around.
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- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95252225519 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74445261966 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540059347181 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4228425209 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1764705882 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274239622238 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963624641603 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628208947503 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175688137023 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594358342917 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.