Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work. So which do you think is the best way to choose career. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
In the contemporary epoch, earning high-income has become a social status. Many believe that receiving huge salary would provide happiness, whereas others think that keen on doing the work gives them more pleasure and excitement. Therefore, this essay will discuss which is imperative either remuneration or take up a job which like most?
Job satisfaction is the major reason for people choosing the domain. It is because of a person who finds the realm, then pursuing a job would bring a sense of fulfilment. Besides, travelling in the field they like most fortify their skills and career progression. For instance, Dr.APJ Abdul Kalam, a renowned scientist and former president of India, had chosen research field on his interest, thus became a successful person. Therefore, everyone could become a prominent personality when selecting the profession that confers the cheerfulness.
Despite lucrative jobs pay unimaginable salary, young people will obtain get deep learning in the field which they like and choose. The employers also could find improves in the productivity when they assign the right task to the suitable person. The employees also could satisfy the work/life balance, for example, run the family without any stress. Hence, more learning will occur when selecting the job, irrespective of salary, leading to strong technical person and also fulfil the objective of selecting the field.
To conclude, I opine that there are two major reasons such as job satisfaction and in-depth learning could make any person happy throughout their career than selecting the job only for moneymaking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to research'
Suggestion: to research
...d former president of India, had chosen research field on his interest, thus became a su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, if, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4246031746 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74264345049 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7671386595 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185955326246 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629184337013 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530771923339 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107432849558 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399939512053 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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