Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with teacher. others think that it is always better to have a teacher. which one do you prefer?
There are various ways we can learn something such as a language or a subject of the school curriculum. Some people believe that they have the ability to learn anything by themselves while others need a teacher to teach them. According to me learning from a teacher is way better than learning by myself.
Firstly, let us talk about learning by a teacher. They are skilled and they have the appropriate education. In addition, they have experience so that they can teach very well. Secondly, they have vast knowledge about the subject. Moreover, they employee up to date methodology to train their student. Thirdly, they can check the progress of the student and guide them as and when it is required. Finally, proper guidelines are necessary to educate students and if followed properly they will surely get better results. Thus teachers can teach far better than learning by themselves.
Now, let us talk about learning by their own. Firstly, it is required great enthusiasm to learn something on their own. In addition, they must have passion towards learning that thing. Most people do not have such qualities. However, some may have such quality. Secondly, people who learn by themselves may research that thing on the internet or any other source. Moreover, they may use some of the reference books to get familiarize with the subject. However, they might not be the perfect source in order to get the appropriate information. Thirdly, they do not have anyone who can check their performance while learning. In addition, they may not be on the right path as there is no one to guide them. Finally, as they do not have proper guidelines and they are also beginner so they will not get up to the mark result. Moreover, they might end up with half knowledge or knowledge without base.
To sum up, it is not at all true that people cannot learn by themselves. However, it requires a serious hard work and a great enthusiasm to learn it but teachers can educate them without having such quality and also achieve a better result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54433504404 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462857142857 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4793758414 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.48 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368498828913 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112209782944 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718377704765 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252820647293 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537485918081 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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