Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your experience.
Sometimes it is heard that people try to find solutions to their medical issues via searching on the Internet. It appears that people are not aware of the risk to cure without scientific knowledge. I explain why this development is negative in this essay.
Firstly, individuals at any levels of education can have access to general medical information on the Internet. However, most of them are not totally correct and people are not able to distinguish which one is true, or which one is false. When people catch a cold, for instance, they may google to find remedies to relieve their symptoms while they do not have the knowledge about consequences of taking different medicines such as overdose, an allergy to some medicins, and damaging impacts of taking several medicines at the same time. In addition, the second and perhaps the most significant drawback of this development is that some medicine manufacturers convince people through advertisement to buy their products that can be dangerous for their health. Thus, the death rate of the wrong use of medicines would be dramatically increased.
It is true that people are capable of solving their problems independently thanks to technological advances. Despite this, it seems that it is not logical to use the Internet for finding medical treatment without the administration of a doctor.
To conclude, it seems to me that, although using the Internet is the most accessible way to raise the level of knowledge in various fields, medical treatments which are related to human's body health should not be searched on the Internet.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12260536398 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85992164288 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0290345498 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.545454545 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243316299052 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900436815361 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564966424733 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152944276555 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342804437343 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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