Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.
Nowadays, it has commonly viewed by many that prisoners become a good citizen when they evacuate from prison. many people believe that they are the great people to guide adolescent group about the threats of committing crimes and I partially agree with them.
To some extent, the prisoners could bring awareness among young generation very nicely as they had experienced the torturous life of prison themselves. they have guilt for the crimes they committed in past. For example, In India, a renowned NGO ‘Save Your Child’ is owned by past prisoner who committed robbery at his young age. he served the jail for seven years and that period had left noteworthy impression on his mind, now he is the role model for many as he saved them from committing crimes.
However, I think the behavior of a person hardly changes, once a thief will always be a thief, so a prisoner is not always a right choice to direct the adolescent people. Also there are many other individuals in our society such as priests, social leaders who can restrain us to do something bad by offering motivational lectures and sharing their life experiences.
In conclusion, I partially agree that a past prisoner could improve the society by restricting teenagers from committing crimes. it is really appreciable, If the person learns from his past mistakes. however, a prisoner who learned lessons in jail is not always a right person to correct the youngster. there are many other famous faces of society such as Teachers, parents, priest who can encourage the child for doing positive deeds instead of committing crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99626865672 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66731023412 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2991418436 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200645044411 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753706447963 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585071250612 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12452885207 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836304034052 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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