Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your own op
It is often argued that some people comfortable in a working environment that is why they stay in an organization all their working life. Whereas there are other's belief that it would be better if we change our company at a regular interval. This essay agrees with the later idea that we should change our organization. The essay will firstly analyze the benefits of remaining with the same company especially salary increment and in the second paragraph describes people psychology of getting new challenges and salary hike.
The main benefit people stay with the same company is because of salary improvement. To put simply, when a person joins a company, he/she sometimes find it difficult to adjust to the new environment. At this point, their salary might be low but At a certain period, with their effort and hard work, their salary might be increased. For example, I know a relative who joined
in a company as little as taka 8000.00 but after a lot of struggles he is now in the Assistant General Level position of that company.
Despite the above-mentioned benefits, many people often feel that we should change our organization from time to time for the following reasons. First, a new organization always creates new challenges
thus a person can increase their learning graph very quickly. Second, after a job switch, a person
can demand a higher salary what he/she got in their earlier organization.
In summary, I am of the opinion if there is no learning opportunity in the existing organization
even though we get a handsome amount of salary, we should change to a new organization for facing
new challenges which ultimately result in a salary increment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...erson joins a company, he/she sometimes find it difficult to adjust to the new envir...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to graph'
Suggestion: to graph
...us a person can increase their learning graph very quickly. Second, after a job switc...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...timately result in a salary increment.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, thus, whereas, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99290780142 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8231583069 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0518481177 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19008149766 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699439946241 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843378356867 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618997849079 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608065902335 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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