Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
There is a question why many people participate in life-threatening sports. In this essay, I will consider some reasons for this phenomenon and give recommendations on how to avoid dangerous moments.
Let us start with motives why this type of sports is so popular. The first reason is that it often seems to fill life with excitement and entertainment. Many people complain that their life has become both ordinary and tasteless, but with the help of extreme sports they say that they feel well again. Another reason is that many risk-takers gain popularity through life-threatening sports. Many extreme sports involve putting life in danger, so it attracts a great deal of spectators, which make the stunt performer famous. Moreover, it is high-paid by advertising companies. Since the sense of danger appeals to many viewers, people develop their skills in dangerous sports, since the more risky the activity is, the more people will come, which bring much them money.
However, there are some ways for officials to diminish danger to people from such type of sports. Firstly, the government should install safer playgrounds, which usually eliminate the possibility of damage to different parts of body and audience, because they would include no dangerous elements, such as sharp corners. Secondly, officials should explain detrimental consequences of risky sports. If authorities educate people about possible damage on TV, more people would stay alive as well as avoid either fractures or breaks. Furthermore, the government should limit some sports with large fatalities. They should measure the likelihood of damage in each sport in order to find the most dangers and exclude them from the list of allowed sports.
In conclusion, even though there are many valid reasons why many people put their life at danger, I think that if the government takes the above mentioned suggestions, more people avoid the opportunity.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30293159609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79694380934 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57328990228 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.327055348 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371055712109 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111961939876 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673879963734 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222846821042 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281631571041 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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