Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What problems does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?
People especially youngsters are moving toward cities and towns, leaving their countryside searching for their future and jobs, to continue or begin their lives. Leaving countryside will cause several problems, but we can find solutions to stop this migration toward cities.
Young people are leaving the countryside searching for jobs, without knowing what problems they might cause. Social life will change and stop, young blood will disappear, and streets will turn as a ghost place, empty and sad. Some studies showed that this migration will impact on the economy, shops and small businesses will close, people can’t make enough money to satisfy their needs. However, increase in rate of ages, will effect on development and improvement of the countryside. For example, the Ministry of Economy in Lebanon, after deep studies showed that the number of young people moving to cities exceed the 40% and causing a serious issue in the balance of economic growth.
On the other hand, solutions must be provided by the governments and local people. The governments should work on building new roads infrastructure, to facilitate the transportation and connection between the cities and country sides. People should invest in their lands, move firms and companies toward the country, which will open the opportunity of new jobs and ideas for the area. Moreover, the governments with the assistant of local people, needs to improve the sector of tourist, to attract people to visit these, where it revitalize tourist traffic and economy. For example, at my region, the council with the help of the local people, both worked to bring investments to our country side, which encouraged us to stay and work here, to improve and grow our place.
Finally, leaving the countryside is causing several problems, but several solutions can be found, and solve this issue for a better way of living. That’s why, people and governments must unit together and work to fix these obstacles, to encourage and inspire young people to stay and live in their regions.
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'roads'' or 'road's'?
Suggestion: roads'; road's
...governments should work on building new roads infrastructure, to facilitate the trans...
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Message: Did you mean 'revitalizes'?
Suggestion: revitalizes
...attract people to visit these, where it revitalize tourist traffic and economy. For exampl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, as for, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22289156627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59352566616 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3233775288 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299924389574 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100096515552 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957947159242 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19726114325 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890039491126 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.