You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter1.Explain why you want to take time off work2.Give details of the amount of time you need3.Suggest how

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter

1.Explain why you want to take time off work

2.Give details of the amount of time you need

3.Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear sir,

I am writing this to consider my leave for mostly 2 weeks. There is an urgent need of going to my hometown, as my mother met with an accident. She is unable to move her leg. Doctors suggested her for bed rest until she get recovered. I think it takes some time. So, I need to rush to my place and could not be available for work during next two weeks. As there is no one to my mother except me I was bothered to move immediately. As soon as she recovers, I will be back to my work.

I have informed my situation to both of my teammates. They accepted to do my tasks during my absence. Also told them to give a ring, if there is an urgency of my presence and to look after any issues which can resolved only by me. At the same time, I will be checking my mails from home and will update you if u want me to work from home to consider my leave.

Thanking you. I here, by waiting for your response.

Your faithfully,

Abc.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this to consider my leave f...
^^^^
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...rs suggested her for bed rest until she get recovered. I think it takes some time. ...
^^^
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...epted to do my tasks during my absence. Also told them to give a ring, if there is a...
^^^^
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to work from home to consider my leave. Thanking you. I here, by waiting for you...
^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g for your response. Your faithfully, Abc.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04812834225 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27820039322 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631016042781 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9918944587 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.0714285714 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157425648088 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694203155233 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767676287557 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13408858649 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659651766015 0.0580467560999 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.3 8.37731958763 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.62 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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