SPOTS SPONSORSHIP AS AN ADVERTISEMENT
Although the advertisements are highly important for any company, it is important to consider which type of advertisement could be appropriate. The sports sponsorship by famous companies has developed over the last years as a new form of advertisement. While many people believe that it has many drawbacks, I support the point of view that its advantages can outweigh its disadvantages.
Those who are not adapted to this opinion may argue that it is a waste of money that needs justification. For example, the money spent on supporting the sports clubs can be spent on supporting the company opportunities or facilities instead. Meanwhile, it is also a high-cost benefit if compared with the regular ordinary advertising campaigns on the television or the newspaper. Others may be afraid that it may easily be converted to a type of monopoly when the famous players got stuck to certain companies only because they are sponsoring their clubs.
I think it is an intelligent way of marketing as well as a mutually beneficial relationship between the sponsor and the recipient. For instance, the sponsor provides the services, the funds, and the products to the sports teams and in return, they got visibility and the media exposure more easily. Not only their logo which is printed on the clothes and equipment, or their name that is spread over the banners in the playgrounds, but also, they easily win the emotions and sympathies if the sponsored team is extremely popular. So, the sponsorship ultimately drives the profitability for both sides.
To sum up, I tend to agree that it is a smart way of investment, which is expected to readily grow with no signs of slowing down especially in our modern life with the permanent ambition of the humans toward the Luxury and the sedentary life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...advertisement could be appropriate. The sports sponsorship by famous companies has dev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99083043095 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3392015142 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108687117468 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391073082402 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480559116179 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566230894672 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479261027778 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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