Students are asked to work short time without pay as part of their education Is this more of an advantage or a disadvantage to Student and Company

Essay topics:

Students are asked to work short time without pay as part of their education. Is this more of an advantage or a disadvantage to Student and Company?

On time Industrial training is a novel concept which had been introduced lately. Most academic causes include students to participate on part time work without any salary. I believe this had brought huge advantages for both student as well as company. This essay will further discuss how practical experience will be beneficial for both parties.

To begin with, one crucial advantage for student is they have the opportunity to gain practical experience at the same time they study. This is because while they are learning the theoretical concept in institutions they can apply those concepts whenever they work in companies. For instance, Undergraduates who follow computer degree they will learn programming languages as part of their university education. So, they can practically build software application by using those programming languages while they are working in software companies. In this way, The students will easily memorize the theoretical concept which they learned. Furthermore if students encounter any practical issue in training they can immediately resolve those doughts by help of supervisors or later they can get guidance from lectures. So by engaging on industrial training and by following the academic process at the same time students will easily get more clearer understanding about the concepts and also gain good industrial explorture. This way universities will built more self confident and excellent industrial workforce.

Turning to the company side, one significant benefit of industrial training is they can easily identify the master pieces and can hire their specialized knowledge later. Specifically, while students participate on practical sessions supervisors can easily identify the bright students. To illustrate,
More talented and innovative learners can be hire as company employees after their graduation. This will provide brilliant employees to the company without any additional cost. For instance, companies will save money for conducting interviews and also initial training. This is because, those selected students had already received specialized knowledge about the company work. In contrast , if industrial placement wasn’t their companies have to conduct interviews and hire their employees. This will waste both time and money, and also no guarantee whether the hired people will be suited for the job.

In conclusion, Industrial placement will help students to become more excellent and confident workers by applying their knowledge at the same time while they are learning. On the other hand this will be beneficial to industries to identify most suited and specialized employees for their well being.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...uses include students to participate on part time work without any salary. I believe this...
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Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...rought huge advantages for both student as well as company. This essay will further discus...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to program', 'to programme'.
Suggestion: to program; to programme
... follow computer degree they will learn programming languages as part of their university e...
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Line 3, column 639, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...theoretical concept which they learned. Furthermore if students encounter any practical iss...
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Line 3, column 935, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'clearer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: clearer
... the same time students will easily get more clearer understanding about the concepts and al...
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Line 3, column 1050, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
... explorture. This way universities will built more self confident and excellent indus...
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Line 6, column 390, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...edge about the company work. In contrast , if industrial placement wasn’t their co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6592039801 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88567791739 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485074626866 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4519368166 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.409090909 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253902450625 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927038672417 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570931375786 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162223704501 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052101539991 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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