Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree/disagree?
Whether skills such as cooking or dressing should be added to schools’ curricula or not remains a controversial issue. While some people claim that these skills can prepare students for their lives ahead, I believe that students should only be taught academic subjects for a number of reasons.
It is evident that academic knowledge can prepare students for a better career. Those who master academic knowledge are usually more likely to pass examinations, gain essential qualifications and increase their job prospects. In addition, academic knowledge is undeniably a prerequisite for entering some of the great guilds such as medicine, law and academia, which can provide secure and lucrative jobs. Blue-collar workers and school dropouts, on the other hand, usually have to cope with a life of cash-strapped insecurity and face the risks of losing their jobs at any time.
More importantly, teaching students academic subjects can make contributions to society. There’s no doubt that subjects such as Maths and Science are tremendously beneficial to society. For example, teaching science is useful because it can lead to the discovery of new medicines and vaccinations. These vaccinations can help to inoculate people against diseases, boosting public health and enhancing the quality of life.
Proponents of teaching practical skills base their claim on the fact that academic qualifications are no longer the only route to success, and practical skills should be taught to students at school. While this is true to some extent, it must be remembered that students still have many opportunities to learn practical skills outside the school environment. For instance, they can learn these from their mothers, who usually take responsibility for handling domestic chores and therefore have much more experience and advice to pass on their children rather than schoolteachers.
To conclude, only academic subjects should be taught to students, and practical skills should be eliminated from the schools’ syllabus. Academic knowledge can not only ensure students’ a brighter and more secure future but also contribute to the development of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... undeniably a prerequisite for entering some of the great guilds such as medicine, law and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5421686747 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97426299833 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53313253012 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7052473442 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346206423578 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122103498952 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09663321176 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216937269875 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107128550948 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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