Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?
These days, success is being measured by possessions and materials. This essay will discuss my view as to why success should not be calculated by prosperity and factors that are essential to creating a successful personality.
I believe that individual success should be measured based on their achievement in the workplace and contribution to society. Many successful personalities around the world have been recognized for their accomplishments in their field rather than their financial status. For example, Einstein has been admired by the world for his innovation in the field of electronics, not for his savings and wealth. Also, community contribution plays a vital role in determining a victorious personality. A very few people are willing to give back to the community that fostered during their journey.
There are two essential factors that could make a person successful. In the first place, a better working environment encourages one to become successful. This is because of the facilities that are provided in the workplace motivate and influence one to achieve something. Furthermore, good health also imperative for a victory. A healthy lifestyle keeps successful people away from illness and ailment. Therefore, following a healthy diet and regular workout routine help people to focus on their goals and avoid unnecessary distractions.
In conclusion, I disagree with the statement because victory must be measured by an individual's accomplishments in their respective fields and contributions to charities. Anyone could become a successful person if they are provided with a better work ambiance and follow a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60079051383 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18794735323 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3015386762 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213681153088 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695429136769 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715379445862 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137808562163 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609922902818 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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