The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods
Considering human being behavior , they have tendency of imitate fashion cloths and consumer goods in one another. While I agree this statement and this kind of human behavior should keep attitude to , without exceeding others.
In deeply observation of human brain it is common process of absorb or copy something from others. For a instance, childhood of humans have more tendency of imitate many attitude from their parents and adults. Then modern scientific are investigated that those behavior of a human style very common in any social background. The fashion cloths and consumer goods are the some of most easy way to show their status among others. There are two different term to called both aspects in the modern society . Human fashion is known as a style and also they have tendency to use consumer good as reflect of higher level branded name.
In deed, they can do any fashion and use any consumer goods but within the limited condition. Some people tend to imitate or copy others to objective of exceeding or highlighted than other humans. It should not be the acceptable tendency .
In Even they use consumer goods, what they really don't want and which are used to show competitive between other public and show their status, is also can't be acceptable way. Therefore human tendency of copy thing from others has to do the carefully way with the required discipline.
To sum up , copy such a things are can be the acceptable human behavior and it should carefully do with a proper discipline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, therefore, while, as to, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9140625 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50573540954 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7429895539 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344322180183 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127656513077 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109235899626 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196340972032 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708935827928 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.