Imitating others is a deep, subsconciously rooted trait in human beings. Even as childern we learn the first lessons by imitating. To copy is not only to get an idea about how to do a certain thing but it is also done to achieve a sense of belonging in a social context. I completely agree that such a tendency helps the growth of fashion, lifestyle and the fast moving consumer goods industry.
When people are introduced to a new and innovative product, possessing it is a sign of upward mobility and in this race the industry benefits as the sales rise. Add to it the attraction of a film star promoting a product and there is even more craze and hype generated around the thing. Everyone wants to be identified with a celebrity and therefore want things which the stars has.
Secondaly, copying others at times is also a sign of a product that has mass acceptance. When companies build a reputation over time about maintaining a certain standard of quality in the produced goods, people learn from each other about it and that is how the client base increases.
On the other hand, some think that there is no originality in copying others and hence they always search for newer things. Some may try to improvise on the trend and yet others may opt for very unique items. This tendency needs lots of experience, courage and financial strength because the market usually supports products which have a mass appeal.
Finally, I second the notion that the proclivity of imitating others helps the fashion and consumer goods industry to grow well. In the long run it also helps create a niche market for those who do not want to replicate.live
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onciously rooted trait in human beings. Even as childern we learn the first lessons by ...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...on the trend and yet others may opt for very unique items. This tendency needs lots of expe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70689655172 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60359442385 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6179414776 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120614024959 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382224522716 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398534370808 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633995596033 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468473445667 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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