The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
In this modernisation era, it is thorough way to copy one another for the sake of popularity in terms of branded dresses and merchandise products. I agree with this notion up to great extent, because every one wants become star attraction in this fast pace of life.
To embark on, nowadays, masses have tendency to change their attitude with modern community. In addition, it is conveniet to buy similar items through online sites such as Flipkart, Amazon, Snapdeal and so on. they offer the huge amount of brand and famous clothes and other daily used items. As a result, dwellers surfing around such sites and partaking to acquire similar things . According to a survey it concludes that, most of the person's followed the celebraties clothes and ornaments, to looks like them. Although, they wear fashionable clothes in parties and events to looks like others and modern.
On the flip side of coin, people not only trying to copy same behaviour to adapt fashionable things but they also copy to do similar work. However, they join gym and recreational centers in order to become like others. Apart from this, similar educational courses and professions are being chosen by the dwellers.they compete each other to achieve high status symbol, even though they refurbish their houses to show like others.
To put the final lid on, human nature is changed by rapidly changing fashion. As, they not even put their efforts to buy same accessories and dresses but also compete to each other in other ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "wants become" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'become' or 'to be become'.
Suggestion: become; to be become
...o great extent, because every one wants become star attraction in this fast pace of li...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... and partaking to acquire similar things . According to a survey it concludes that...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed by rapidly changing fashion. As, they not even put their efforts to buy same a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98814229249 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5077349496 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0634252032 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0769230769 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157504655548 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495058961469 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463713958729 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862173688037 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409897645647 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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