There is no doubt that constructing a new cities is challenged in the modern era because a various things have to considered while planing. Therefore, some individuals admit that playground and sports facilities should be given priorities while building new city as compared to the shopping complex.However, I think all of three amenities can gain same importance in order to provide good lifestyle to humans.
Grounds are playing an indispensable role in public life, the primary reason is that inhabitants are being addicted of sedentary lifestyle due to the cutting-edge technology, in other words, people are spending huge amount of time in the front of laptops in order to complete their assignments and children used to play video games which leads to the problem of obesity and many diseases stem from this obesity such as high blood pressure, diabetes and so on. If public spend time in the play park, they would get rid from these health issues. Furthermore, as numerous building are constructed in order to meet the human demand so that people cannot meet each other unless new public parks be built when people socialist each other, get rid from stress and breakdown their mundane affairs.
In addition, sports facilities include running, jogging and many more,it would more likely to stay fit and fiddle owing to use these things. Although, shopping plaza are less important in human beings, it cannot be neglected because it offers recreational activities for both parents and children where they can spend quality of time with together. As well as shopping is not only stress buster but also leisure activity for many people as a result building of shopping malls may not gain less priority rather than public parks and sports facilities.
In conclusion,given aforementioned information, it is abundantly clear that although, shopping complex is playing a minor role in stress reduction, it might not neglected while planning cities, and recreational activities should be given through play ground and sports facilities in order to enhance the public health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14371257485 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69292695228 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 334.0 20.2975951904 1646% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1718.0 106.682146367 1610% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 334.0 20.7667163134 1608% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 165.0 7.06120827912 2337% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258947558136 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.258947558136 0.084324248473 307% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145201356471 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638154947512 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 169.8 13.0946893788 1297% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -267.53 50.2224549098 -533% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 133.5 11.3001002004 1181% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.01 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.8 8.58950901804 277% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 135.6 10.1190380762 1340% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.7795591182 575% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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