There have been many technological developments in the 20th century, for example in transport, telecommunications and health. What technological development do you think has been the most important? How has it changed people's lives? Have all the changes been positive?
As the 20th century has been the century of innovation and invention, every field has been touched by being it a transport, telecommunication, or health sector. There are multiple developments that have taken place and bought new revolution for the economy. I feel the biggest and most important development is the internet, not only it has brought phenomenal developments but also it has created a revolution in society. After the development of the internet, human life has been changed and it has a greater impact on it, the internet has presented all the global information at one portal along with creating more job opportunities. Since the advent of the internet, it has been proved to be a blessing for humankind but with a few of the disadvantages like unhealthy lifestyle and isolation. In order to delve deeper, let us examine the given questions about the most important technological development in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, let us unfurl the most important technological development that has taken place. First and foremost, as the internet is a most important technological development, it has become a global village for humans. To explain, in order to get any information, the internet is the easiest, fastest mode regardless of its location, time. Not only the internet has proven to be a time-saving option by not spending time in libraries or by reading books to get any knowledge but it also it has the feature of saving money by not exploring that particular place to get any sort of guidance and it has also put forward people of different communities closer to each other by exchanging information online. As long as the authenticity of information is concerned, it is always reliable and updated. To cite an example, the research was conducted by The University of British Columbia of Canada in June 2019 on a group of 500 students ranging between 16-18 years revealed that 93% of them gathered all the information about their new University, college and course by internet from their home in different countries.
In addition, because of the multiple job opportunities being developed online, it makes the internet a dominant technological development. To explain, not only with the help of the internet people can apply in different cities being in their hometown but also they can grab the jobs available in various countries and they can complete all the formalities hassle-free. Since the internet has been developed there is a plethora of working options online too, individuals are earning a good amount of income by online work. As there was a pandemic situation also internet helped a lot by giving an option for individuals working from home, it helped them in earning and surviving in this difficult situation. As long as youngsters are concerned apart from their regular studies, jobs, they prefer to do something online, it helps them in earning extra income. To elaborate, Mr. Rajiv Khatree the Editor in Chief of The Tribune in his editorial on Online Jobs in May 2020 issue stated that rather than working in offices for fixed working hours, young generation preferred to work online of their interest with flexible hours because of the internet being available anywhere anytime.
On the contrary, despite having multifarious benefits of the internet, there are certain drawbacks attached to it which cannot be ignored. Primarily, because of the internet people are leading an isolated and unhealthy lifestyle. To clarify, after the invention of the internet, people are so occupied with it that they do not have time for their family, friends, they sit for long hours online without even thinking about food or break and it is detrimental for their health. Since the internet gives you various options to enjoy, study that people have stopped talking to each other and they are always on the internet that is affecting their physical and mental health. Not only internet is keeping individuals busy in their own world, that they do not know what is going around them but also it is putting hazardous effects on their health, lifestyle. To exemplify, a survey was conducted by United States Census Bureau in London on July 2020 on a group of 100 individuals ranging between 20-30 years revealed that 82% of them were going through mental or physical issues because of their spending more time on the internet.
To encapsulate, it can be concluded that in spite of a few disadvantages of the internet, still, it is quintessential. As it is putting certain harmful effects on an individual but it can be overcome by its limited use and the various helpful part of the internet is much more powerful. Not only internet is helping people in getting any sort of knowledge, information at one place but also it is helping young generation to fulfill their dreams by working in various fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their home in different countries. In addition, because of the multiple job...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, then, apart from, i feel, in addition, sort of, in spite of, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 41.0 13.1623246493 311% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 24.0651302605 274% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 121.0 41.998997996 288% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4065.0 1615.20841683 252% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 807.0 315.596192385 256% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03717472119 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.32989168958 4.20363070211 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86672034834 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 349.0 176.041082164 198% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432465923172 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1285.2 506.74238477 254% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 13.0 2.10420841683 618% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 4.76152304609 420% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.359596719 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.555555556 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206387762418 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669548042982 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653231368606 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126478746828 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118448158613 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 176.0 78.4519038076 224% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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