There is an increasing trend of old people living longer in many countries around the world.
Do you think this has a positive or a negative effect on the population as a whole?
Elder people are living longer nowadays in a vast number of nations worldwide. Although I firmly believe that this could be a positive trend because it shows a country well-being condition, this could result in some financial and social shortcomings for countries.
Firstly, the extension of life expectancy is an event of a country financial, health and welfare life conditions. As long as a country is able to meet its people fundamental and lucrative demands, this is more likely to hike its living expectancy rate. West European countries are sound examples of this phenomenon where life expectancy is relatively higher than that of Asian and African in which life expectancy is gravely low. Moreover, while people could live more, they are given more chance to spend time with the loved ones which is beneficial for both sides. Children, for example, have more chance to spend time with their grandees while their parents must not be able to allocate enough time to them. Accordingly, this rising trend could be considered as a positive one from these perspectives.
Conversely, this trend can have some drawbacks such as high pressure on a country economy. In fact, the more a country have elder people, the more it should pay salaries to them. This will not only be resulted in asking for higher tax from working population but also put higher pressure on utilities and commodity which need to be provided for elder ones. A vivid example of this is Germany where working people pay 70 percent of their salaries because the older population account for one third of its people and they could not work to pay tax. In addition, while people live longer, it requires more consideration form younger generation. This will undoubtedly result in youngers tiredness which will affect their happiness and daily life.
As the phenomenon is a sign of sound living condition of a nation and could never be considered as a negative trend, for the shortcomings it might have some solutions must be fund and actions must be done.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: MORE_A_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a more country'?
Suggestion: a more country
...sure on a country economy. In fact, the more a country have elder people, the more it should p...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... must be fund and actions must be done.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, conversely, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, third, well, while, for example, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97941176471 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63221162946 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508823529412 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.061542213 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18893277794 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741866841134 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386764525022 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125138872916 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400504823741 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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