These days more and more people are going to other countries for significant period of time, either to find a job or to study.
There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can faces some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
It is true that many people leave their country to travel overseas for work and study and it is increasingly getting popular. Whether or not this is a good thing for an individual is debateable. On the face of it, the advantages seem most visible, but could there be a downside to this phenomenon of moving abroad as well? I will discuss some of the reasons why travelling overseas is so popular and some of the challenges to overcome.
Lets begin with by looking at the advantages of moving abroad. One of the main positives of travelling overseas is that it broadens your horizons. What I mean by that is that you get to meet new people from different cultural background and experience different food and how about their culture.
Secondly, moving abroad can lead to a better quality of life. For example, British and Australians travel to warmer countries ever year to work and study. These countries have warmer climates and encourage a better work-life-balance. In addition, by living overseas, you can gain qualifications and language skills, which may get you a better job, once, you’re back in your country.
Turning to the other side of the argument, culture shock is a major problem. Many people who take a year out find it hard to cope up with the language barrier, the food and general cultural differences. This often leads to homesickness and in some cases a sense of isolation.
All things considered, it is clear that this situation is not as straightforward as it first appears. You need to weigh up the pros of better lifestyle, weather and so on, and the cons of culture shock and language barrier. Personally, I believe the benefits in terms of personal growth eventually out weigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, i mean, in addition, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86824324324 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87934375069 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5613526474 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7647058824 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220097146951 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603240073864 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341133976886 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105343560771 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501252844108 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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