Smacking Children is the best form of discipline. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
In the past, parents may have been beating their children for manners; these days it is not common for parents to give physical punishment to their offspring for good behavior. There is evidence that spanking children could lead into some mental illness or lack of confidence in them. This essay will discuss, why spanking kids is entirely unnecessary despite some potential risks.
Many parents believe that children would be able to give best discipline only if you punish them by spanking. They are justifiably worried that if their children wont have any fear of punishment that could potentially make them spoiled. Some parents grew up getting physical punishments and they apply same strategy on their offspring. For instance, it is very common in many Asian countries to spank their children to educate and teach good manners. For all these reasons, many parents smack their children to get best out of them and create a fear of pain instead of failure.
Despite the reasons associated with punishing children for discipline, the idea of spanking them is completely preposterous. Punishing children by spanking them is not ideal in today’s world, as it is believed that beating children can damage their confidence while growing up. According to one research, punishing children by putting ban on their activities or stop them by meeting their friends is way better than smacking them. Overall, the idea that spanking could make child’s behavior good is illogical and it could lead to far worse outcome for society.
This essay argued that parents who are in favor of spanking their kids have a flawed understanding of children behavior and underestimate the affects of what they believe. In my opinion, giving physical punishment to children is completely unnecessary despite some parents believe this is the best method of discipline.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the best'.
Suggestion: give the best
... believe that children would be able to give best discipline only if you punish them by s...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eate a fear of pain instead of failure. Despite the reasons associated with puni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23745819398 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70150074684 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0262107497 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13855128598 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607585883791 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449055341896 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984608739776 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372482824656 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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