Nowadays, it has become popular to have a collective with different age in one company. Despite the fact that on this base can occur varied inter-age conflicts of interests, the positive aspects of such development prevail. This essay will prove that it is a beneficial trend and will provide the strong evidences.
On the one hand, modern business environment is rapidly changing these days. Therefore, companies have to implement new trading strategies and ideas in order to keep their stable annual income. In this respect, it is crucial for any institution to have the same amount of experienced workers, who are long time in that business, and young graduates, who just got their diplomas. From this perspective, an old generation will be able to enhance their knowledge with fresh information and to teach a new generation of basic all-time working rules. For instance, many successful advertisement agencies always invite young professionals, who just graduated from universities, to work on a par with experienced old agents. Thus, they get fresh ideas and combine it with successful working models. Generally, a healthy combination of solid experience and innovative ideas helps companies to stay competitive and productive on a fast changing market.
On the other hand, there can be some drawbacks of having mixed generation counterparts. Namely, there can be difficulties in understanding between each other based on opposite views, which people of different age have. For example, an old professional, who used to work in the same manner all the time, will negatively accept a new, sometimes controversial, business strategy, moreover he will try to prevent any innovation. However, having arguments in a collective is undesirable, it helps company in general, as it creates a new productive ideas.
Considering everything, in terms of frequently changing market, it is more beneficial for the companies to have people of different age and experience in the same workplace. As it gives fresh ideas together with solid experience.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'idea'?
Suggestion: idea
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37577639752 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08846989161 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568322981366 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9814858065 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15178905682 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499433386453 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462067756787 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10480562749 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411050407032 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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