The multitudes are tying up knots at a later stage in life. I think this is a positive development. Apart from being highly free from social problems, it is giving an opportunity to youth to focus on building their career. Similarly, this is leading to more marital satisfaction which is a healthy development.
From my point of view, social problems were rampant when people married in their teens since emotional maturity does not peak until tween years and as such they did not have the idea of the essence of marriage. Although they were bound my relationship, they were not aware of the subsequent outcomes. Similarly, population is under control since youths are now focusing on bettering their career than on giving birth to child. They are also coming up with new ideas which are entertained by world for rapid advancement, socially, economically and technologically.
When people marry at a later point, they get to experience more marital satisfaction as they understand what relationship entails and what is required to nourish that relationship. Both husband and wife understand each other very well and solve their problems without making a mountain out of a molehill.
To sum up, marrying later in life has a lot benefits. Society can enjoy peace with the reduction of social problems, increase in youths participating in societal progress and higher marital satisfaction.
- The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offences To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems To what extent do you agree or disagree What other measures do you think might be effective 73
- In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people What do you think may be the reasons for this What problems might this cause in society Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experie 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 100
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this overweigh its disadvantages 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, well, apart from, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17699115044 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94832408781 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646017699115 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.388482688 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130058125015 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475425741468 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491788347315 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736682655041 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211476094248 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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