Today more and more people tend to live on their own.
In the modern time, people have been interesting to live alone more than before. There seem to be two main causes behind this, and I tend to believe that this is a totally negative trend.
First of all, the living costs have been increase compared to past. This increase would reluctant people to be in a relationship or get married. people believe by having people around them, they should spend more than they budget which result in more working hours. In addition, social media such as Instagram or Twitter caused people become familiar with vitual friends. These virtual friends can be a good alternative for people since they would not have any serious emotional contact with them. Moreover, these online platforms take most time of the people based on statistics, a person almost spend 7 hours per day on instagram or similar applications. With these applications few people might have a tine to feel lonely or tend to cantact with others.
However, its negative consequences are not negliable. People who live on their own might not have considered that in their older time they would need acomppany. As the human gets older he/she would become both sensetive and vulunerable from disease. He/she require someone to takes care of him and be his mate. A lonely person not only get bored during his eldery, but also he might suffer his pain in lonliness. furthermore, people who tent to live alone might lose their social bondings. This tendency might cause depression since they do not have any friends or wife/husband in their life to open up their fears or problems. These people would not have someone. This lack of presence lead people to anxiety and depression.
Having discussed all the points, I imply that increasing the number of the people living lonely would cause a dramatic problem in societies in long-term. People need to comminucate and connect with others to improve their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...to be in a relationship or get married. people believe by having people around them, t...
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'can be'.
Suggestion: can be
...h vitual friends. These virtual friends can be can be a good alternative for people since the...
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Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'requires'.
Suggestion: requires
...ve and vulunerable from disease. He/she require someone to takes care of him and be his...
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Line 4, column 414, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
... he might suffer his pain in lonliness. furthermore, people who tent to live alone might lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92569659443 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46513127487 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566563467492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7369821456 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.55 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283123856678 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842547568393 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790658496128 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176392711405 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248314071859 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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