Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Worldwide travelers are taking an interest in the exploration of regions with hostile conditions. Most of them are driven by passion and thrive to achieve that no one has achieved in the past. Though it is adventurous to experience such an environment, in the long run, tourism overload could adversely affect the entire habitat.
Due to urbanization, human has lost its natural survival instinct. However, when someone visits a place with extreme weather conditions, they likely to enjoy it because it not only provides an adrenaline rush but also gave them a sense of achievement. Such tourist spot mostly offers a range of outdoor activities for individuals and groups, which is a great way to understand their strengths and capabilities.
Although increased tourism has provided an additional source of income, it had destroyed local habitat to a great extent. Firstly, the overload of traveler has negatively impacted the fragile environment, secondly, consumption of limited resources such as land and water have increased which has disrupted ecosystem and thirdly, increased population aggravated pollution issues. A pile of waste material and commercialized local surroundings in Ladhak valley is a sad illustration of the adverse effects of increased tourism.
To conclude, I must say going out of one's comfort zone and experiencing extreme territories are worth and provide us life-long memories. But to maintain the delicate nature lifecycle travelers should behave responsibly and help local people to maintain their ecology. Additionally, local authorities can play a major role in the implementation of rules and regulations to save the serene beauty of the region.
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- News stories on TV and in newspaper are often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this. 56
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... To conclude, I must say going out of ones comfort zone and experiencing extreme t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49615384615 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10480397003 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2495495474 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821941348778 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237114603294 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038309618939 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0473936959769 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053148982423 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.