Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctica.
What are the benefits and disadvantage for tourists who visit such places?
Throughout the world myriad of tourists and wanderers going to the places, those are well-known for its extreme conditions like Sahara desert and Antarctica. While there are many benefits to visit such places, it also has a slew of pitfalls as well.
To begin, the primary and foremost advantage of travelling to these places is that a traveler gets to experience the most unusual and surreal beauty of Mother Nature, which is generally not experienced by ninety percent of the tourists, who travel around the world at the famous tourist destinations. Some people restrain themselves from the popular destinations and avoid activities those are cliché, as they adventure the side of the world which is not explored by everyone and just anyone. Later their story and survival become published and they set an example for others; in addition, they sometimes receive publicity. Furthermore, in many cases, such travelers get a funding from the authorities and get admired worldwide. For example; the most bizarre motorbike road trip from India to Thailand received funding by “Honda” and similarly, people who travel to Antarctica were covered by news channels.
However, on the contrary, travelling to difficult places can cause many health problems. For instance, altitude sickness is common among people travelling to “Khardungla Marg” in Ladhak which is the highest road on the planet at 14500 feet. Nevertheless, a person not only faces health issues but also visiting extreme condition place where one can barely find any facilities such as hotel, medical assistance etc. can be challenging. On top of this, one needs a substantial amount of funds to reach these places and special pieces of equipment. Climbing to Mount Everest is a salient example.
To conclude, it is evident that travelling to unique places can be full of adventure but not without the cost. On the one hand, people can enjoy the most secluded places on earth but; conversely, there are lots of challenges as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in many cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21913580247 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8603019352 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.097055745 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225888838039 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665769401135 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596065755311 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139427455449 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662302551549 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.