Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
Over the past few years, there has been a significant increase in a few people travelling to the inhabitable or hostile places such as, Sahara Desert or Antarctic. Most of the people are driven by passion to achieve something or they want to experience the adrenaline rush that such expedition brings on.
Travelling to difficult places has their own advantages and disadvantages. One of the biggest benefits to undertake a strenuous journey is that it makes you stronger and build your confidence. While the journey can be physically and mentally exhausting, the exhilaration that one experience on the completion of the journey is something which cannot be explained in words. Other major benefit of travelling such remote areas is boasting up their country's economy and creating job opportunities in tourism field where people cannot find any other mean to earn a livelihood.
On the flip side, difficult journeys can be extremely dangerous, and things can go against the plans. I read in an article that 55 people died this year climbing Everest, more than twice the number who died last year. There are many incidents reported of people dying or going missing while experiencing the wild.
There are also many travelers who sustain serious injuries that leaves them immobile for rest of their life. Another major drawback of travelling in wild is that getting help on time is very unlikely or almost impossible if needed.
To conclude, difficult journeys are extremely thrilling and very dangerous at the same time. It requires extensive training and one should consider carefully before kicking off such journeys.
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- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? 73
- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. 56
- During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25855513308 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77311200852 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634980988593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4973121743 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126550433449 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390071896425 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041185224392 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594713925757 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372295572071 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.