TODAY MORE PEOPLE ARE OVERWEIGHT THAN EVER BEFORE. WHAT IN YOUR OPINION IS THE PRIMARY CAUSES OF THIS? WHAT ARE THE MAIN EFFECTS OF THIS EPIDEMIC?
Many humans, nowadays, are fat and heavy in comparison to past time. The main cause of this obesity, in my perspective, is the busy working schedules of every human being and it will affect them with gastric and heart related problems, which are explained in this essay.
The busy working life of people is the major cause of overweight of human’s body. They do not have time to cook home-made food for themselves, so they eat ready-made food such as burgers, which will, consequently, put their weight up. Moreover, due to people’s hectic schedules, they are unable to do exercises and walking to keep them fit and saves from obesity. For instance, my friend, John, go for his job at 8 in morning and come late in evening; therefore, he cannot prepare food for him and daily eat different pre-cooked food such as burgers or noodles, which raises his weight from 70 kilograms to 95 kilograms to make him fat.
Nevertheless, overweight brings the various effects on human’s body. Firstly, people suffer from numerous gastric problems, which sometimes become severe. For example, a survey taken by Medical Department in India in 2018 revealed that 85% people are suffering from gas and regular pain in stomach because of their overweight. Secondly, in small age groups such as youngsters are facing the heart problems as they are not only eating junk food, which makes them fat, but also they are not doing any exercises to overcome their weight.
In conclusion, the main reason for overweight is busy schedules of people that make impossible for them to do exercises and eat healthy food; however, effects of obesity are severe which will bring massive heart and gas-related problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02816901408 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66549063203 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3522871068 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.818181818 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5454545455 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102066881247 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489564301545 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488995885208 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776335765326 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320502022286 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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