Today people are living longer so they should have to work longer. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, everything is changed, society, way of living and so many. People are living in several places, each has its allocations, some think that they are living longer so they must extend their work age, others disagree and feel it’s time to stop.
Living in a developed country assist people to enjoy their lives and feel comfortable and live more, that’s why number of people prefer to work longer. First, each day an invention is released, improvement in medical sectors, that help people to cure rapidly, stay fit and have more energy, that’s why they think the can work more and don’t retire early. Second, clean and healthy environment, play a main role to stay well, where people at old ages can work normally and concentrate on their jobs, without stress. For example, in Australia the government raised the age of retirement to 74, so they won’t live at the expenses of the state at young age. From my side I agree, if the country help its people and all facilities are available, why not to work longer.
On the other hand, some environment won’t assist people to work longer and encourage them to stay at their jobs, so they prefer to give up work earlier. First, several people believe that at a limit age they must stop working and relax, since they worked for a long time, need to enjoy and benefit from the remaining time. Second, some think that they should rest, and their children take care of them, or move to an infirmary, where thy can spend more time with others at their same age. For example, my grandfather retired at age of 65, and now is enjoying his life with his grandchildren and family. In my opinion I disagree, since someone can still give more to his society and share his experience to the younger.
In conclusion, as we can see that human think that they must work longer because people are living more, others believe the opposite and should step down. From my point of view, I agree that if we can still give more, and still full power and healthy we can work longer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71388888889 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37889381908 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494444444444 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5220540866 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.214285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32975041309 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132196308563 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951083002527 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239681519684 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575379282187 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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