Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
Due to the development of urban areas, where of living of individuals has changed drastically. A major decline is seen in the people's lifestyle during the past few decades. The essay will scrutinize colossal reasons behind it followed by some remedies before venturing a logical conclusion.
One of the major causes for this change is, cities are overcrowded as these are the hubs for various industries. Persons from all over the rural areas come here for different job opportunities because of scarcity of employment in their locality. Another reason behind this problem is damage to environment through air, water, and noise pollution. Pollution is not only caused by industrial waste but also by excess uses of private vehicles. For example, Delhi has the most polluted air in all over the India due to the pollution released from factories and private vehicles. Eventually creating harmful environment for its citizens, which affect their life expectancy. Despite numerous efforts of the government, this situation cannot be controlled.
However, quality of life can be improved if public and authorities come together to fight against these issues. Promoting public transport in cities may inculcate the habit of using buses and local trains rather than using private deals. Do this benchmark cannot be achieved by just circulating government orders, awareness among the public is also required. Adding to this, option of work from home should also be provided to employees wherever is possible in order to control the population of such cities. For instance, during the COVID-19 pandemic, most of the corporate offices were shut down but their employees worked remotely from their hometowns which improved their health along with no loss to the company.
Two encapsulate, better life expectancy is in the hands of human beings. If they do not take preventive measures at this time, it would be harmful for them to survive in the future stages. Government should also take steps to improve the lifestyle in cities by allowing only nature friendly businesses plans, so that life could be better in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...tically. A major decline is seen in the peoples lifestyle during the past few decades. ...
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Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ses plans, so that life could be better in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25368731563 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68165768289 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625368731563 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1781307531 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9444444444 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863574578524 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269897313354 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361283410185 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0473913056246 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288633423254 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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