Your have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion.
Writer a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter
say which points in the article you agree with
explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers.
offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.
Dear Steve,
I am writing this letter to express my views on the article published in the Hindu last Saturday written by you, which states that all city centers are lookalike in our nation.
Firstly, I would like to appreciate your work as you have covered all the basic details of different town halls. I agree that all these centers are based on the traditional theme which makes them look similar to each other. In addition, each hall is red in color due to which their design cannot be differentiated.
Apart from this, there are some qualities that make each city center different. If you have a close look at them, you can see there is an essence of their history and culture. Furthermore, there is a variety of handicraft and art crafts displayed on the walls of the hall and all these are unique in their own way.
I would like to give you a detailed tour of my town as I have a deep knowledge of the cultural diversity of my area. I will be looking forward to hearing from you.
Thanks and Regards
Austin
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...centers are lookalike in our nation. Firstly, I would like to appreciate your...
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Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: red
...o each other. In addition, each hall is red in color due to which their design cannot be dif...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l these are unique in their own way. I would like to give you a detailed tour...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks and Regards Austin
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58823529412 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40844834059 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4609019695 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28360448079 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938098400391 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666861531727 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160133322223 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706637185323 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...centers are lookalike in our nation. Firstly, I would like to appreciate your...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: red
...o each other. In addition, each hall is red in color due to which their design cannot be dif...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l these are unique in their own way. I would like to give you a detailed tour...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks and Regards Austin
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58823529412 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40844834059 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4609019695 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28360448079 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938098400391 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666861531727 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160133322223 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706637185323 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.