The use of cell phones (mobiles phones) has grown rapidly in the past few years. People use them for both business and personal reasons.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of the widespread use of cell phones (mobile phones)? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Now a day almost every people in the Word have a cell phone. Someone for personal reasons, and others for business. The reason is that the use has grown rapidly in the past few years changing the habits en society. I shall discuss few of them below.
This technology helps us in so many facts. Wherever we are, whenever we need, just touching a screen we are communicated instantly with every part of the word, to talk with family or to close a business. In addition to have the camera, music player and GPS in one hand instead of taking all things separately.
With upside of everything, there are downsides too. Cell phone generates dependence and we only need to see people having lunch, walking in the street o speaking with friend. In each case at lest one is with the cell phone at the hand. The problem in the families is that the technology put the communication away, everyone is connected to his own reality, feelings are not shared so nobody knows what is happening to the other. My little brother failed his exams as he neglected his studies due to excess use of cell phone.
If humanity can balance the use it would be the best tool created by the man in the last thousands of years. There are already cell phones that can predict heart attack, do an electrocardiogram or detect low insulin. People need to re-educated on how to use, take control on the time we spend using it and the occasion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'habits'' or 'habit's'?
Suggestion: habits'; habit's
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s due to excess use of cell phone. If humanity can balance the use it would b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58203125 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50465569907 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6999869893 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26666666667 7.06120827912 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329753201517 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977905119972 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075476386673 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201450147615 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136624004497 0.056905535591 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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