Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, young people especially included children spend long time to play and use a computer. While this computer has benefits for children, it would be more negative in the future. I do not agree that children use internet and online every day.
Admittedly, it is true that computer is one of vital devices for living in modern society. Firstly, children need to use computer to complete their homework which are given by teacher. As useful way, there are easy to find and search related information. Secondly, kids these days are finding new friends online such as social networks and computer game. To be specific, people would learn other country languages if they make a community online.
However, using a computer should be more negative for children. I believe that people in contemporary society spend their time too long with computer devices like a Ipad and a laptop.
In addition, children are easily addictive when they play computer games with peers. It should be both inefficient and disturbed for their studies. Furthermore, playing game means children could meet a various people online. This virtual friends could make them to be wasted times and those people can possibly bring wrong way like crime things. Therefore my view is that children should make a appropriate plan like limited time when they need to use computer.
In conclusion, computer is a useful device for human. While it has several negative point, parents can manage computer time.
My opinion is positive of them.
- Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08870967742 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49967479675 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0544176426 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.1111111111 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266546574098 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958846430137 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089653526794 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156404192942 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826828053561 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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