in the recent decades, the violence in the playground has been growing that parents should have effective solutions for this issue. Many people teach their children not to answer the bullies by violence which is a positive education. I strongly agree with these parents and in this essay, I will present this way andIn state my opinion with the relevant examples.
First of all, parents should know the actors which influence to their kids's character and the source lead to violent personality. For example, children can watch the action film in the internet or on tv and they may repeat it in fact that is absolutely dangerous. Therefore, parents should supervise their kids on using internet or watching programmers on the tv which have the content are not suitable with kid's age. In addition, parents have to control behavior of children and direct the, forward to become a kind person.
Furthermore, parents have to prevent the kids from hitting back the bullies because it is a negative activities. In other words, they should explain to the kids that they can inform to adults such as parents, teachers and others who can help them instead of solving bullied problems by violence. Moreover, adults should spend more time on taking care of their kids and pay more attention on their children.
In conclusion, parents should consider seriously about the problem that instruct their children not to hit back in the cases. In my mind, family is the most close with kids that may help for non-violence in the future.
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture nationalities To what extent do you agree or disagree with this 75
- In modern world many children spend a lot of time in front of computers television and smartphones This is very harmful to them To what extent do you agree 67
- The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 100
- Violence in playgrounds is increasing However it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back bullies Discuss this view and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94163424125 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48275250801 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56420233463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.424079491 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.833333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231318960195 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899925309951 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560700485572 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150212754977 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605662287401 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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