Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is often said by many that having a lot of money or assets can allow humans to remain happy and content. However, a life without wealth does not actually mean people have a life full of struggle and unhappiness. Happiness can be found in other aspects of our existence such as looking after our family or close friends, and helping people without expecting anything in return.
It depends on individuals interest to experience happiness. For instance, some people may not have a big house to live in or a luxurios car, but they may have a family with many siblings and relatives. It is not uncommon to have someone in our life, especially who are close to us, who have a good job but not a professional one and is still satisfied with what he or she is earning. Such individuals find joy and laughter in simple things such as helping their parents at home or their work, looking after brothers and sisters. The amount of satisfaction they receive in spending time with their close acquaintance is enormous.
Moreover, people who are already in a well settled positions, who earn a lot of money such as doctors, lawyers and accountants, are enjoying and providing their services to other people not because they get huge revenue from it, they do it with the intent to help people. Making someone else’s life easy and happy is the prize they want in return than money. For example, I have few friends who are doctors and nurses. They volunteer to help people who are in desperate need of medical attention. Such people’s happiness is in helping or benefiting others.
On the whole, having enough money or living a lavish life is not the only way happiness can be attained. Happiness is found in simple things that we already are gifted with. Such as helping people and having a family with many brothers and sisters.
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- Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness.To what extent do you agree with this statement?Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 397, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... money. For example, I have few friends who are doctors and nurses. They volunteer to h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7507788162 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58031198082 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514018691589 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6894285374 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0615031005505 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0230589302232 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216842099608 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397682100805 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122114287656 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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