Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Many people think that more money means more happiness. This is not necessarily true. Wealth, on one hand, does add many luxuries in our lives but on the other hand, also disconnects us from the simple joys of life. I believe that it makes one pursue material happiness and one ends up being alone, which is definitely not a happy state.
Wealth does bring certain benefits to it, for instance, if we are financially sound we can go to school and colleges of our choice. One can explore various exotic travel destinations which we are all aware are not cheap. A wealthy background does bring in better and more opportunities as well. It helps us in making influential acquaintances as well, which helps us to escalate professionally. To infer, we can say that many star kids already have their future secured. They can venture into any exciting activity they wish.
We can still not say that wealth guarantees happiness because we have seen many wealthy and successful people often committing serious steps like suicide. Not all wealthy people are happy. Wealth makes people so materialistic that they become too conscious about their status in society. In order to gain wealth, many young professionals often become victims of exploitation as well. People often drive themselves in the maddening race of acquiring wealth and often miss the little joys of life. Wealth often devoid people of the simpler and natural joys of life.
Hence, we can say that although some financial security is necessary for life that doesn’t mean that the poor cannot be happy. Happiness is a state of mind. It doesn't depend on the amount of money one carries in their pockets, otherwise, we will never be able to see a smile on the face of the poor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...happy. Happiness is a state of mind. It doesnt depend on the amount of money one carri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87583892617 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6015283281 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0533959303 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4736842105 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0635177358037 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0239061159468 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305374082697 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0399132479913 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216561672976 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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