What are the advantages and disadvantages of maternity leave?
Which side do you feel outweighs the other?
Maternity leave allows a woman to strike a perfect balance between their career and family life. This comes with some merits as well as demerits. I definitely believe that the pros by and large outweigh the cons and throughout the essay I will form a justify of my viewpoint through plausible examples.
To commence with, nowadays woman have become an indispensable part of the corporate world. Nowadays, Woman format least form half of a company’s working force. So a company who targets success, cannot function smoothly without women’s intellect. As any every multinational company works on the principle of teamwork, and a team is made of men and women. Thus, to negate the legitimate requirement of a woman, would not only tarnish the image of a company but would even further deter resourceful women from seeking employment in such companies. Take for illustration, currently a lot of big Indian companies like Infosys Information technology consulting company, Reliance Industries Limited, Tata group of companies is also in favour of sanctioning paid maternity leaves for the women welfare of the female staff of the companies. That’s why such companies are highly popular among the women workforce.
Another valid point which come to my mind in favour of maternity leaves. For, according to my belief such leaves should be treated as a necessity rather than luxury, because a woman’s body goes through labour pains and even pregnancy related complications of late are on a rise. Moreover, even after a pregnancy a woman has to face a lot of weakness, post- pregnancy depression issues, plus being available around the clock for breast-feeding for the child welfare. So this kind of dramatic transition in life require some kind of preparation time. For instance, even the government India has presently amended the law of Maternity benefits by increasing the duration of maternity leave from 12 weeks to 26 weeks. The counties who believe in equal rights have of late, recognised the need of the woman for a recuperating period post pregnancy.
To sum up. I believe in today’s times a sanctioned maternity leave will help the woman workforce to be successful career woman as well as fulfil her dream of becoming a mettlesome mother.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: format the least
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, at least, for instance, kind of, as well as, by and large, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1902173913 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94491006214 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3564076748 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0862409114026 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267742032577 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381235643965 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598820263257 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229406666563 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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