When Choosing A Job, Salary Is The Most Important Consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Well-paid job is indeed pivotal in anyone's successful career path, however, need to think its consequences. This essay will elaborate on the importance of job satisfaction than a money-making job.
Firstly, the company, recent years, provides an attractive salary pay package to the youngsters to work for their organization that means they ready to offer immense perks and rewards to one who has talents and skills. For example, Google offers the highest salary to its employees. Although they recruit with excellent attractive salary, they expect them to work hard without leisure time. This may ultimately change people's lifestyle and pattern of behaviours that become adopted to sedentary work culture. Added to this is to increase the work pressure due to overwhelmed workload that tends to strain the young adults. Besides, sometimes, they may lose their job when they do not perform to be expected to their pay incentives and perks.
Rather, there might be said that when they select the job which they like most would be enviable and they can achieve whatever they want. Also, they do not have any stress when they do the work whey they like most. This may be brought low perks in the initial stage, but for long runs, this could usher a plethora of success and honours. There is a multitude of people became figureheads in society because they have chosen the career suitable for their skills, for example, Dr.APJ. Abdul kalam, well-renowned scientist, later became a president of India.
In conclusion, I agree that pursuing someone's dream and try to achieve in that realm is much more indispensable than chasing lucrative jobs to lead a strenuous life for the entire career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09677419355 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58941163341 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2884947161 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128807935612 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453714910715 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490335843399 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824156145591 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204133952693 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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