In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence.
Parents play an imperative role in shaping the character of the children in this millennium century. Many people are considered to be earned additional income to run the family, while some are believed to be lacked to assist them. Therefore, this essay will debate the pressing matter that growth of the children depending on either both parents stay with them or going for a job.
On the one hand, some people think that parents should spend huge time with children, or at least one of them should contribute to paying attention to the kid's till they might be grown-ups. This is because parents are appeared to be the good teachers and role models whom they teach the youngsters enormous good things, for example, social values and code of conduct. Besides, children might study the behaviour of parents that help them to become a good human being, thus avoid bullying, truancy and delinquency. Hence, keep spending time with kids is indispensable for their career progression.
On the other hand, in the modern ages, it is irrefutable that both the parents ought to work to preserve the family due to the cost of living in major cities, even the same situation with many towns and countryside. In many families, parents are decided to be left the infants to child-minding or arrange a babysitter to take care of them. But it is a detrimental culture as the juveniles sometimes chances to learn the bad pattern of behaviour that is a risk when considering children's future. As an example, children would adapt to other cultures. As a result, the children with the absence of parents may start to do trivial offences that may far-fetched the career.
To conclude, I opine that good behaviour and become a responsible person to the family and society is the key necessary for any one's in life that can obtain only from parents if they make time their children, although money is required to survive in this day and age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87009063444 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59630016479 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552870090634 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4250203513 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262358028402 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868946560624 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394377318819 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15963322081 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189249184481 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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