When people live in a foreign country, they should follow local traditions and customs. Do you agree or not?
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are migrating to the countries than ever. This raises questions about the integration of newcomers into society. While some people believe immigrants should keep their culture, I think this idea that people should adapt to the culture of the host society is more justifiable for certain reasons.
To embark on, it is undeniable that immigrants will experience a culture shock phenomenon once they moved to a new country. According to many psychologists, the most practical way to tackle with this issue is that immigrants to merge themselves into a new culture with all traditions and customs by adapting to all customs and rituals. This manner not only relieve the pressure and stress of this feeling but also give them a sense of community.
Furthermore, outsiders might have more chance of success when they have a willingness to integrate into new society by accepting and following its custms. For example, they are more likely to make friendship or connection at workplace and get a promotion. Finally, respecting other cultures is a considered as a behavior of well-matured and open-minded people who are eager to experience the diversity of culture and getting to know new traditions.
Admittedly, it is true that immigrants should maintain and value their culture and convey it to next generation. However, culture assimilation expand the host culture by introducing new ideas, new expertise, and new cuisines which benefit both the society and non-native residents.
In conclusion, based on aforementioned explanations, it is justifiable that outsiders should accept new culture with all customs, tradition, and all unwritten rules if they want to either make progress in their career or friendship to live more easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34519572954 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00157209434 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5896833977 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147856263027 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520124677686 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399174845637 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794627360677 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356321928761 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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