When People succeed, it is because of hard working. Luck has nothing to do with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I totally disagree with the statement that success people have also luck in their achievement of goal, but from my point of view successful people do lots of hard work to achieve that target in their life.
I think hard work teaches the person how he has to tackle with different problem or situation in his life or career to make him or her successful,not everybody become goal achiever in one night it take several years of determination and goal focus to make it day and night to reach his or her aim, in today world their are so many successful people who had shared their story how they have to face such problem and achieve that goal in their life, for example Sachin Tendulkar an Indian cricket player and worlds greatest batsman, this person has shared his story of his struggling days and how he work hard to achieve his dream to play in indian cricket team.
some people also says that luck is also the main factor of each person life, but from my point of view if luck can bring success then people would never have to do hard work in their life they would idle seat or wait for luck to hit the success bell in their life which does not mean any thing if their is no struggle or passion for his life, i believe that hard work brings up the person life to what he had decide to see in coming future and become more successful and maintain it properly and shared his story to next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, as to, for example, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33840304183 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14097141975 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509505703422 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 87.0 20.2975951904 429% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.245624496 49.4020404114 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 380.333333333 106.682146367 357% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 87.6666666667 20.7667163134 422% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.3333333333 7.06120827912 288% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168086150807 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147805384075 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070992741637 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147805384075 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070992741637 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.8 13.0946893788 327% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 50.2224549098 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.08 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.8 10.1190380762 364% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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