Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy with everything organized and in the correct place What is your opinion about this

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?

‘Cleanliness is next to godliness’ is a very famous saying meaning hygiene is a sign of purity. On account of this, many individuals believe it is quintessential to keep residences and offices neat and tidy by arranging things in their right places. How true is the above statement? This essay will attempt to objectively examine all significant components in detail.
Objectivity being of the essence, the following words will weigh one side of the issue against the other. In my opinion, managing materials correctly is advantageous. Upon further reflection, however, there are other dimensions to the matter. The following two paragraphs will delve effectively into both aspects.
First, locating things is easier when they are arranged properly. Second, a neat and tidy desk or house is appealing and has a great impact. To substantiate the above, visiting my aunt’s house is quite an experience as it is well managed.
However, it becomes obvious for any person to take documents or files from one’s cubicle without their permission. Next, this could lead to a psychological problem for many as they are intolerant to dirty places. To corroborate what has just been stated, my cousin has an obsessive compulsive disorder and she gets irritated if she enters any unclean place.
In light of the above, positives like spending less time in finding the right material are evident. Contrarily, issues like taking important papers without the responsible person’s permission command equal consideration. Bringing this essay to a close, there are at least two sides to any situation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, well, at least, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3031496063 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97520338862 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669291338583 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6670100935 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2352941176 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886499450369 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240111358923 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277478369552 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042346682096 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218565371701 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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