Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?
Everybody likes being successful but sometimes we are still failure. Some people say that success is all about luck. In my opinion, luck just has a small portion in somebody’s success, the factors that decide someone will be succeed or not are well preparation and effort.
Firstly, sometimes, we cannot deny that fortune takes a part in someone’s success. For instants, the exam will be easier for some students if there are some questions that they well prepared, or a hard-working worker get a promotion because there are some changes in his/her company. These people might not achieve their success if the exam had different questions, or the company had not change. However, the point is they are all well prepared, so when the opportunity comes, they can take advantages of it. Therefore, success is more about being well prepared than being lucky.
Secondly, success will be meaningless if it is decided by luck. People must try so hard to get their aims. By investing time and effort into what they are doing, people became better and better at something, this process is the most rewarding part of being successful. Even though they might not always get succeed, this encourages people to make effort to become better version of themselves. People will have nothing to proud of if their success is just because they are lucky.
All in all, luck is not decisive factor in somebody’s success. People need to try by themselves to get what they want. I believe that when we work hard enough, luck will come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...erent questions, or the company had not change. However, the point is they are all wel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88416988417 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52739790985 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552123552124 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0090268724 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0625 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930637359209 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361772403464 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232342153019 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650055979544 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00957558652766 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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