While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, human beings are increasing greenhouses gases in Earth's atmosphere such as Carbon-di-oxide, Methane, Cholorfloro carbons etc; The rise of these gaseous elements have caused many environmental problems which is debateable. Some people think that effects of deforestation is the main environmental issue instead of global warming. The essay will discuss both arguments in detail and give evidence about why the latter is more impactful than the former.
On the one hand, global warming is spawned due to multiple reasons including number of vehicles escalating everyday, factories burning fossil fuels and so-on. it is clear these transportation and industries shoots up air pollution in Earth's surface thereby leading to the depletion of ozone layer protecting our planet from harmful ultra-violet rays. Moreover, scientists presented a study stating that these causes have led to drastic change in climatic conditions which will further melt our polar ice caps in Greenland. the defrosting of these caps will lead to the increase of sea levels by six times which will wash away many islands in the near future.
On the other hand, the consequences of deforestration is also an important issue. More and more countries are aiming towards growth and development thus going on the path of industrialization that means cutting down of more and more forests for township. Governments now have taken many initiatives like green construction and population control to decrease the chopping of wooden trees so-as-to save the greenscapes. In addition to this, many awareness campaigns are organised by social groups and NGOs to educated the public.
To conclude, though the lands getting deforested forms a part of global warming which is being taken care of currently, one must start looking into other factors that effect global warming and try to control it to save the planet as this is the superior problem that our world faces now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...including number of vehicles escalating everyday, factories burning fossil fuels and so-...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ctories burning fossil fuels and so-on. it is clear these transportation and indus...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this transportation' or 'these transportations'?
Suggestion: this transportation; these transportations
...ing fossil fuels and so-on. it is clear these transportation and industries shoots up air pollution ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, thus, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34527687296 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89288593947 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651465798046 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0050502732 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.75 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242800555522 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727288992273 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605243452645 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14103604844 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711411706627 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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