You have a full time job and you are also doing a part time evening course You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your teachers In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action

Essay topics:

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.

You now find that you cannot continue the course.

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter

describe the situation

explain why you cannot continue at this time

say what action you would like to take

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear ................. ,

Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Tony from the Part - time evening Information Management class. I am writing this letter to inform you that, I will not be able to pursue my classes further due to my workplace commitment.

Recently, My company has planned to takeover an organisation and they have selected me as the main lead for this merger. This was a sudden plan which was taken up by the organisation and it also came to us as a surprise. Currently I am busy with the presentations which I need to present to the Board of directors for this acquisitions.

The company which is getting merged is from another city and my manager wants me to be there at the company for setting up the entire work. I will have to travel on Monday itself. As I will be in another city, attending the evening session will not be possible at this moment.

As this setup is for couple of months, so once the work is completed I will be travelling back. Hence I would request you to kindly allow me to continue the same course in the next term.

This new task is very important for my career and I hope that you will understand my reasons to leave the course midway.

Yours Sincerely,
Tony

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Average: 7.3 (2 votes)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am Tony from the Part - time evening I...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 319, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...o present to the Board of directors for this acquisitions. The company which is g...
^^^^
Line 8, column 97, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...is completed I will be travelling back. Hence I would request you to kindly allow me ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44907407407 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55543146846 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587962962963 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1715867372 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0833333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183880637329 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667462002484 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549175165939 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103988968273 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053755173817 0.0580467560999 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am Tony from the Part - time evening I...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 319, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...o present to the Board of directors for this acquisitions. The company which is g...
^^^^
Line 8, column 97, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...is completed I will be travelling back. Hence I would request you to kindly allow me ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44907407407 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55543146846 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587962962963 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1715867372 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0833333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183880637329 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667462002484 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549175165939 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103988968273 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053755173817 0.0580467560999 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.