Write about the following topic.
Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Being in a glamourous industry has its own pros and cons. However appealing it may seem, there are definately quite a lot of inconvinence in the lives of the people who are a part of it. Famous people are envied and admired by numerous people and would want to know how they keep up with their daily routine. Fans would want to imitate what they wear, what they eat, what products they use, so on and so forth. This might seem exciting for a while, however, after a certain point of time, it becomes frustrating to not have privacy. Each and every human being needs some privacy. In fact, nowadays young children as well need some space from their parents. With a lot of papparazzi and media buzzing around where ever famous people go, it becomes pretty frustrating for them. Imagine not being able to have a simple cup of coffee at a cafe peacefully without anyone asking to take pictures and selfies time and again!
The media has grown threefolds in the coming years and are always aware of the whereabouts of these famous people. It is their job to intrude in the lives of popular people to make thier articles more interesting and increase the number of readers. No sooner do they step out of their house, a restaurant or the airport, than they are blinded with flashlights from camera's and videos. This is the price paid for the fame and popularity they receive. Before getting competely into this industry, everyone is well aware of the consequences they have to face.
In my opinion, media and fans should take it easy on these famous people and give them some breathing space. Although it is always nice to have a fan following but having ones own space and privacy is a must.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, well, while, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57095709571 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33550531202 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6498338577 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229932502788 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714765572276 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436355101309 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156110008373 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170469853862 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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